The given line graph below illustrates the total sales of three pizza brands in Vietnam during 2017.
The line graph below illustrates the total
sales
of three pizza
brands in Vietnam in 2017.
Overall
, all figures for the three pizza
restaurants experienced a fluctuation during the year. While
the Pizza
company, Domino Pizza
both showed general growth in sales
over the year, Pizza
Hut ‘s sales
figures saw a decrease overall
.
Both Pizza
company, Domino Pizza
followed a very similar trend, beginning at about 34 and 31 million
dollars, respectively. Both mentioned figures had fluctuating patterns over the 12-month period, with Pizza
company’s revenue in July reaching the highest peak ( over 40$ million
) and then
declining slightly before increasing again to approximately 34 million
dollars at the end
of the period. At the same time, the sales
of Domio Pizza
also
rose by nearly 33$ million
after reducing moderately from June to November.
Pizza
Hut, on the the hand, had a lower share of the market. That figure for remaining restaurants started at 13$ million
in January before oscillating through the year to plummet the
lowest bottom in December ( around 3 Change preposition
to the
million
dollars )Submitted by phamnhung275 on
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