The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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consumers

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products

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two

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countries which

was

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expendetured

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expanded

in 2010.

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those

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in United Kindom and Frances were cars which were the biggest spending pound sterling than other items using product

pounds

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sterling. Meanwhile, the lowest was perfume

consumer

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goods

consumer

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good. Look at

details

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United

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Kindom cars

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the biggest using

consumer

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good

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goods

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at at 450.000

pounds

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sterling followed by Books

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the

socond

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second

bigger at the point 400.000. Compared to Computers and Cameras were the same using

products

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. The lowest was Perfume at

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approximately

approximatelly

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approximately

155.000.

consumer

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good

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goods

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pounds

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sterling Regarding the data in France cars

was

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the highest at 400.000 using

products

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the second bigger

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computers at amount 355.000 compared to Books was the

fugure

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figure

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at 300.000

consumer

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goods

then

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parfume

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perfume

was at 200.000. using

products

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then

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Cameras

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the lowest at point 150.000

consumer

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good

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goods

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pounds

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sterling.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words products, pounds, consumer with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

154 words

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