In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

In certain countries

university

students

which not leave

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parent's

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parents'

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home

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homes

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,

whereas

other

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others

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move to the city where their

university

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universities

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located

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are located

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. Living away from

home

can lead to some challenges,

however

benefits of independence, new social

experience

and personal growth

much

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better than

disadvantages

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the disadvantages

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. Living away from

home

during

university

has several notable advantages.

First,

it

provide

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for

student

independence, which major skill in adulthood. When

student

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students

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live in different

city

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cities

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, there

is

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challenges with manage own time,

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and finance

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finance

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finances

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,

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and develop

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develop

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developing

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well daily routine to upgrade

yourself

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themselves

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.

This

experience

is crucial in helping them acquire life skills like

time-management

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time management

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,

budgetting

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budgeting

,

cooking

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.

Moreover

living independently can improve academic

perfomance

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performance

. Without any distractions

of

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from

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home

,

students

often can focus on study. Using

university

library

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libraries

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or study groups

which

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whose

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mission is

support

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to support

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student

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students

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to gain

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in gaining

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new knowledge can be useful in future life

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living abroad

home

provide

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provides

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new social

experience

. Especially if you reside in a new

county

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country

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with international

students

. Cultural exchange, new lifestyle,

another

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and another

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view of the world can lead to

understand

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understanding

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global issues and

adapt

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adapting

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to diverse

environment

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environments

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.

For example

:

person

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a person

the person

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from

rural

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a rural

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area with traditional principles

by

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moving to

urban

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an urban

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lifestyle can gain a lot of insights and multicultural interactions, which can greatly increase educational

experience

beyond the classroom.

However

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there are drawbacks to consider. The most significant

it is

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loneliness and missing

home

problem

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problems

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, which affect

for

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apply

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student

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students

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mental health and well-being. Being away from family during

stress

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stressful

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period

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periods

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like exams can be challenging.

Nevertheless

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nowadays modern communication devices,

such

as video

call

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and social media,

made

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it easier to maintain contact with your relatives.

Finally

,

while

living away from

home

during

university

presents certain challenges, the benefits of independence, and academic and social experiences far outweigh these disadvantages. The skills and

experience

gained from living

independetly

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independently

from parents, prepare

students

not only for future careers

,

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but

also

for a more adaptable life.

Therefore

, the advantages of living away from

home

during

university

better

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are better

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than

drawbacks

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the drawbacks

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.