Some people believe that the biggest problem facing cities is the increasing number of cars. Others say there more serious problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is undeniable that as

cities

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developed and progressed, their major issues have increased. It is argued that the main problem is an increase in figure of vehicles;

however

, others believe there are many other subjects which are as controversial issues in urban areas.

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essay will discuss both views and

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I will reveal my orientation towards it. The developing

cities

have faced numerous

challenges

which

requires

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efforts from authorities and locals. Some of these

challenges

are associated with each other and they play

as

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a

cause and effect

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role.

For example

, developing

cities

leads

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population

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growth.

Therefore

, city dwellers require

the

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residential areas,

entertaining

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space

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and other infrastructure,

such

as

park

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, schools, libraries, and transportation systems.

Moreover

, accommodating

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population to

cities

’ capacities is a challenging issue. All in all, the aforementioned could deprive the

citizens’

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comfort

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and decrease the amount of welfare .

On the other hand

,

in addition

to the mentioned

challenges

, the most significant one would be a rise in

automobiles’

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numbers because they cause a plethora of issues which directly

effect

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on

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health

,

such

as air pollution. It is universally acknowledged that vehicles are the major reason for air pollution which leads to a myriad of diseases,

such

as Asthma.

In addition

, not only physical

health

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but

also

mental one is affected

due to

the severe traffic congestion

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created by numerous cars on the road. Sticking in

traffic

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jam could harm

mentally

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them mentally

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.

For instance

, scientific research in China illustrates that staying in

the

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traffic jam causes anxiety and

nerve

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in the long run. In conclusion, numerous

challenges

are in various

cities

which could certainly influence locals’

health

and welfare. From my point of view, the

challenges

which

leads

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to harming

health

are the most crucial one which needs to

tackle

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urgently.