task 2: people think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. give you own opinion,

One school of thought holds that the

cost

of fuel for transportation should be charged more by the

government

as a solution to environmental problems.

While

it may be useful for some reasons, I would believe that there are more sufficient measures to deal with environmental issues. On the one hand, there are positive effects to the idea of increasing the

cost

of energy used by

cars

or other means of transport. The foremost advantage is the possibility

to decrease

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the number of journeys by conventionally fueled

transports

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among

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people as

cost

increases may cause them financial problems.

This

renders more citizens to choose public transport

such

as buses or trams for much more reasonable fees.

Furthermore

, the money raised can be used to invest in researching

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hybrid

cars

or completely electricity-generating

cars

and improve public transport’s qualities. With the former, the atmosphere can be better without dust and toxic emissions,

while

the latter encourages residents to use buses or trams more frequently, escalating into a habit.

On the other hand

, the aforementioned idea only aims to solve limited facets of environmental s including air pollution and energy concerns. To solve the issues from the roots, more effective measures are necessary.

In addition

to the cooperation between individuals and the

government

. The

government

should spend money to educate and raise people’s awareness about the seriousness of environmental matters.

This

means that individuals may pay attention to and favour friendly-environment products or schemes.

Besides

, enforcing assistance policies to firms which contribute to preserving the environment through innovating products or inventing tools helps to gain benefits for the environment

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also

sustainable economics. Take,

for example

, the Vinfast car brand,

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has emerged lately with the aim of developing electric

cars

and motorbikes, it now expanding its business as a technological electric taxi brand thanks to the insurance from the authority and widely introducing it to national TV channels. In conclusion,

while

acknowledging that the increase in the

cost

of fuel for transportation may have some particular benefits, I contend that there should be more sufficient measures given by the

government

and

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cooperation with individuals.