The graph shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metal during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metal during 2014.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the given graph illustrates the average monthly change in the cast of three metals in 2014. In general, what stands out from the graph is that the change in the prices of Nickel and Copper was increasing except for Zinc which increased during the time from January to December. As regards alternation of Nickle which deceased generally,
however
, it changing of it started at 6 per
cent
at the beginning of the year which had the most alternation of these months and in June it was at minus three per
cent
which was at the bottom of the list, next from Juley to September like others metals it remained stable, and
finally
, in December it was 1 per
cent
which was not quite as popular as others metals.
In addition
, in terms of Copper which was in second place
at the end
and terminal month, it decreased gradually from 2 to under 0 per
cent
in June,
however
, changes in the price of Zinc started at 1 per
cent
,
then
it rocked at 3 per
cent
in the first month but after that, it decreased for the next 4 months which was in third place in the beginning but
at the end
, it was at top of the list,
finally
,
at the end
of the year alternation of Copper was 2 per
cent
and Zinck was just over 1 per
cent
with a slightly different.
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