The graph shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metal during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metal during 2014.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the given graph illustrates the average monthly change in the cast of three metals in 2014. In general, what stands out from the graph is that the change in the prices of Nickel and Copper was increasing except for Zinc which increased during the time from January to December. As regards alternation of Nickle which deceased generally,
however
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, it changing of it started at 6 per
cent
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at the beginning of the year which had the most alternation of these months and in June it was at minus three per
cent
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which was at the bottom of the list, next from Juley to September like others metals it remained stable, and
finally
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, in December it was 1 per
cent
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which was not quite as popular as others metals.
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, in terms of Copper which was in second place
at the end
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and terminal month, it decreased gradually from 2 to under 0 per
cent
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in June,
however
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, changes in the price of Zinc started at 1 per
cent
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,
then
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it rocked at 3 per
cent
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in the first month but after that, it decreased for the next 4 months which was in third place in the beginning but
at the end
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, it was at top of the list,
finally
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,
at the end
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of the year alternation of Copper was 2 per
cent
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and Zinck was just over 1 per
cent
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with a slightly different.
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