More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countrys. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweighs the drawbacks?
Education is said to be the major tool to improve human behaviour and in
the
recent Correct article usage
apply
time
, many Fix the agreement mistake
times
students
are opting for admission in
higher institutions Change preposition
to
that
is
outside of their Change the verb form
are
nation
of residence. This
essay will discuss not only its advantages but also
to show that the demerits is
not at all important to think Change the verb form
are
off
.
The first advantage is exposure to Change preposition
of
learn
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learning
modern
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the modern
a modern
way
of solving Fix the agreement mistake
ways
national
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the national
a national
problem
. Studying in another Fix the agreement mistake
problems
nation
open
up Correct subject-verb agreement
opens
students
to a more experiental
approach to a national Correct your spelling
experimental
experiential
problem
which has defile solution
of Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
expert
in the country, Fix the agreement mistake
experts
students
who study in such
field
in a Correct article usage
a field
nation
where they are more experienced and have been known for their success in such
field can be fixed to solve such
problem
by the time they return to their nation
after completion of their academic year. For example
, The nation
of Zimbabwe sent some young graduate
in agriculture to Nigeria for a postgraduate program in agriculture that Fix the agreement mistake
graduates
focus
on palm kernel planting for the production of palm oil and Wrong verb form
focused
30years
later, they became the world exporter of palm oil.
The second merit is Correct your spelling
30 years
improvement
of international Add an article
the improvement
an improvement
relationship
. Many nations are experiencing smooth cross business Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
idea
because of the educational exchange Fix the agreement mistake
ideas
program
that they enter into. Fix the agreement mistake
programs
This
friendship ochestrated
shared Correct your spelling
orchestrated
solution
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solutions
on
national issues. Change preposition
to
For example
, ECOWAS which is an organization of Africa
nations was established many years ago by Replace the word
African
students
during one of their joint conference
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conferences
eventhough
terrorism Correct your spelling
even though
cript
into many territories in Correct your spelling
script
crept
this
tie.
In conclusion, better
Correct article usage
a better
problem solving
approach and international friendship are two main Add a hyphen
problem-solving
merit
of studying abroad, Change to a plural noun
merits
although
insecurity is a major demerit however
, the positive profit that Add the comma(s)
, however
come
from Correct subject-verb agreement
comes
these arrangement
far Change the determiner
this arrangement
these arrangements
outweigh
the negative side effect.Correct subject-verb agreement
outweighs
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coherence cohesion
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coherence cohesion
Introduction and conclusion are clear and well structured.
task response
You provided relevant examples to support your points, which strengthens your argument.
Fully explain your ideas
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- Sentence 2 - Example
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