The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graphs depict the correlation between the
number
of mobile and fixed
phone
subscribers in four different nations -
Eritrea
,
India
, The UK and
Uruguay
- from 2005 to 2015.
According to
the data,
Uruguay
displayed the highest
subscriptions
for mobile phones,
while
the UK accounted for the largest
number
of fixed
phone
subscriptions
.
Eritrea
showed similar trends in both categories. It is noteworthy that both
subscriptions
in
India
exhibited different results. The
number
of mobile
subscriptions
in The UK increased from 100
people
in 2005 to 125
people
in the following year, and
this
figure remained relatively steady until 2015,
while
the
number
of fixed telephone
subscriptions
decreased slightly over the decade, except for a small rise in 2009. The
number
of
Uruguay
's mobile
subscriptions
had risen by 2013, peaking at 150
people
which hit a record high, and
then
gradually dropped until 2015 with 140 subscribers.
In contrast
,
this
trend for fixed mobile in
Uruguay
had only 35
people
in the year 2015, reaching the same level as the figure at the beginning of the period. In terms of the other countries,
India
's data presents a stark contrast in its mobile and fixed
phone
subscriptions
. Over the decade, mobile
subscriptions
in
India
saw significant growth from a mere 1 person in 2005 to an impressive 80
people
in 2015.
Conversely
, the fixed
phone
subscriptions
in
India
showed a negative trend, dropping as low as
Eritrea
at only one person.
Eritrea
,
on the other hand
, was the only country where the trends in both
subscriptions
remained essentially unchanged, with small fractions.
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