The charts below show the percentages in typical meaks of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts clearly
demonstrates
the proportion of additives in four daily meals of Americans, which are considered unhealthy if consumed excessively. Change the verb form
demonstrate
Overall
, it is evident that dinner dishes have the most amount of saturated fat and sodium
, whereas
snacks incorporate sugar more than any other meals
.
Looking at snacks and breakfast dishes, they have Fix the agreement mistake
meal
a
same Correct article usage
the
amout
of Correct your spelling
amount
sodium
in them with 14% of the whole. However
, when it comes to saturated fat, they both have more of that with 21% for the former and 16% for the later
. Meanwhile, snacks consist of the most Correct your spelling
latter
amout
of sugar consumed with more than 40%. Correct your spelling
amount
In contrast
, the same figure for breakfast is less than a fifth.
As far as lunch and dinner are concerned, the latter is the absolute leader in incorporating sodium
and fat with 43% and 37% respectively. Moreover
, with having
23% of the consumed Unnecessary verb
apply
suger
, dinner takes the second place in Correct your spelling
sugar
this
figure. In comparison, lunch has less than a third percentage of intaken
Verb problem
apply
sodium
and fat, coupled with
an estimated 20% of sugar.Submitted by bita.rezaei7052 on
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