The line graph shows the information for internet users as percentage of population in three countries from 1999 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the information for internet users as percentage of population in three countries from 1999 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the proportion of
internet
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users as a percentage of the population in three countries over 10
year
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years
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. → 10
years
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/ a 10-year
period
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Overall
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,it can be seen that the percentage of
internet
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users witnessed a significant increase in all three countries during the
period
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. Noteworthy the
rate
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of
growth
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in
Canada
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was the largest. In 1999, the United States had the highest percentage of
internet
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users at 30%, followed by
Canada
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in second place at about 20%. After rising rapidly during the
period
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1999 to 2005 from 25% to 70%,
this
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rate
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slowed down, reaching 80% by the end of the cycle. ->
period
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,
Canada
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occupies
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10% in 1999,With only one-third
the
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US,
Canada
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has shown strong
growth
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over the
years
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, surpassing the US in 2002 at 45% and becoming the country with the largest
internet
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coverage. In 1999, Mexico had the lowest
rate
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of
internet
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usage at less than 10%. After 20
years
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, despite continuous
growth
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from around 5% to nearly 35%, Mexico's
internet
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usage
rate
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remains the lowest. Sum up,
while
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the USA and
Canada
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have had high
growth
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rates over the past 10
years
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, Mexico has had the slowest
growth
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rate
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of the three countries.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, years, period, rate, growth, canada with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 5 times.
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