The line graph shows the information for internet users as percentage of population in three countries from 1999 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
given
bar graph illustrates the Verb problem
apply
population
of elephants
in Asian countries in two different years, 1997 and 2004.
It was clear that the majority of the number
of elephants
tended to decrease over a 7-year period in all nations, except Cambodia. India had the highest quantity of elephants
and the opposite was true for China.
The country with the largest population
of elephants
in both years was India with approximately 10000 elephants
in 1997 and then
declined to 7500 elephants
in 2004. Followed was Myanmar with the second - highest
maximum Correct your spelling
second-highest
number
of this
species which is
5500 and 5000 in 1997 and 2004, respectively. In 1997, the Wrong verb form
was
population
of elephants
in Thailand was just less than 1500 compared with Myanmar and then
substantially decreased to lower than 2000 in 2004. Malaysia and Sri Lanka had the same quantity - 3000 elephants
in 1997, however
in 2004, the Add a comma
however,
number
of elephants
in Malaysia dropped to 1000 which is lower than approximately 1900 compared with Sri Lanka.
In 1997, the number
of Asian elephants
in 4 countries namely Vietnam, Cambodia, Laos and China were
just between 1000 and 1500. Change the verb form
was
However
,Lao’s elephant population
slightly rose in 2004 which was in contrast
with other countries.Submitted by cathyngo1512 on
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