The pie charts below show the electricity generation by source in China and Spain in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The pie charts below show the electricity generation by source in China and Spain in 2005 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The multiple pie charts compare the proportion of electric
power
sources used in France within a decade, from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
, most of the electricity in 1990 was produced by fossil fuels
such
as Coal, Natural
Gas
, and Oil,
whereas
in 2010 it was dominated by Nuclear
Power
, which is a renewable energy.
Furthermore
, Natural
Gas
decreased significantly to rank second to
last
in
this
period.
To begin
with, Coal and Natural
Gas
had the same ratio in 1990, both at 28%, followed by Oil with a similar value at 22%. Other than that, Nuclear
Power
only accounted for 17%.
Lastly
, Hydro
Power
was the least chosen alternative to generate
power
with merely 6%. Moving to the year 2010, Nuclear
Power
dominated the chart which means it became the main source of electricity in France with 67% of the fraction.
Furthermore
, Coal and Oil had been highly declined to only
at
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13%. Meanwhile, the smallest was Natural
Gas
and Hydro
Power
with 4% and 2%, respectively.
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