The pie charts below show the electricity generation by source in China and Spain in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The pie charts below show the electricity generation by source in China and Spain in 2005 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The multiple pie charts compare the proportion of electric
power
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sources used in France within a decade, from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
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, most of the electricity in 1990 was produced by fossil fuels
such
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as Coal, Natural
Gas
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, and Oil,
whereas
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in 2010 it was dominated by Nuclear
Power
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, which is a renewable energy.
Furthermore
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, Natural
Gas
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decreased significantly to rank second to
last
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in
this
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period.
To begin
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with, Coal and Natural
Gas
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had the same ratio in 1990, both at 28%, followed by Oil with a similar value at 22%. Other than that, Nuclear
Power
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only accounted for 17%.
Lastly
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, Hydro
Power
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was the least chosen alternative to generate
power
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with merely 6%. Moving to the year 2010, Nuclear
Power
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dominated the chart which means it became the main source of electricity in France with 67% of the fraction.
Furthermore
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, Coal and Oil had been highly declined to only
at
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13%. Meanwhile, the smallest was Natural
Gas
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and Hydro
Power
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with 4% and 2%, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words power, gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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