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The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
While
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 the table shows the
sources
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 of
money
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 which provided a
budget
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 for a certain area of Britain in 2017 and 2018, the pie charts illustrate the distribution of
this
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budget
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 in three different fields.
Overall
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, it is evident that
while
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 the national government was the main source of
budget
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 collection, other
sources
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 like grants provided the least amount of
money
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 through both years.
In addition
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, a vast amount of the
budget
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 was allocated to employee salaries.
To begin
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 with, the amount of
money
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 that was obtained from various
sources
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 increased insignificantly.
For instance
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, the national government’s help experienced a small rise from 175.5m to 177.8m in
this
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 period.
Also
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, the local taxes and other
sources
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 gave more financial support from 91.5m to 102.3m and 38m to 38.5m during the period.
Moreover
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, the percentage of the
budget
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 received by staff and officers was by far higher than other sectors, rising from three quarters in 2017 to 69% in 2018.
Furthermore
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, the
money
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 that was allocated to the technology advancement rose slightly from 8% to 14%
although
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 it was the lowest proportion compared to others in 2017. It is noteworthy that the figure for construction and transport systems remained constant over the period.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sources, money, budget, m with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fiscal allocations
  • Revenue streams
  • Budgetary oversight
  • Expenditure
  • Financial appropriation
  • Government grants
  • Local taxation
  • Operational costs
  • Capital investment
  • Public safety
  • Crime prevention
  • Community policing
  • Resource allocation
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Budgetary constraints
  • Fiscal year
  • Fund disbursement
  • Budget deficit/surplus
  • Trend analysis
  • Financial sustainability
  • Law enforcement funding
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