The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
While
the table shows the Linking Words
sources
of Use synonyms
money
which provided a Use synonyms
budget
for a certain area of Britain in 2017 and 2018, the pie charts illustrate the distribution of Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
budget
in three different fields.
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Overall
, it is evident that Linking Words
while
the national government was the main source of Linking Words
budget
collection, other Use synonyms
sources
like grants provided the least amount of Use synonyms
money
through both years. Use synonyms
In addition
, a vast amount of the Linking Words
budget
was allocated to employee salaries.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, the amount of Linking Words
money
that was obtained from various Use synonyms
sources
increased insignificantly. Use synonyms
For instance
, the national government’s help experienced a small rise from 175.5m to 177.8m in Linking Words
this
period. Linking Words
Also
, the local taxes and other Linking Words
sources
gave more financial support from 91.5m to 102.3m and 38m to 38.5m during the period.
Use synonyms
Moreover
, the percentage of the Linking Words
budget
received by staff and officers was by far higher than other sectors, rising from three quarters in 2017 to 69% in 2018. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
money
that was allocated to the technology advancement rose slightly from 8% to 14% Use synonyms
although
it was the lowest proportion compared to others in 2017. It is noteworthy that the figure for construction and transport systems remained constant over the period.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sources, money, budget, m with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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