The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The information about the
number
of temporary migrant workers
in Australia
, New Zealand
, the United Kingdom
, and the United States
is indicated by
the table. Change preposition
in
This
table compares the number
of temporary migrant workers
in 2003 and 2006, as well as
the number
per 1000 people in these countries in 2006. The number
of short-term migrant workers
in all four countries experienced an increase, although
there was a difference in growth among them.
In 2003, the country with the largest nonpermanent expatriate workforce was the United States
, with 577,000. This
number
was larger than the combined number
of short-term migrant workers
in Australia
, New Zealand
, and the United Kingdom
. That year, Australia
only had 152,000 migrant workers
, and the United Kingdom
only had 137,000. Meanwhile, the number
in New Zealand
was much smaller, at only 65,000.
However
, the growth of migrant labor in the United States
between 2003 and 2006 was smaller if we compared it to the United Kingdom
. The United States
only saw a 101,000 increase in 2006, while
the United Kingdom
experienced a larger increase with 129,000 more migrant workers
compared to 2003. However
, the growth of the nonpermanent expatriate workforce in Australia
and New Zealand
is much smaller than that in those two countries, at 67,000 and 22,000.
Nonetheless
, the proportion
of temporary migrant workers
per 1000 people in the United Kingdom
and USA is less than the proportion
in Australia
and New Zealand
. New Zealand
has a proportion
of 21.1, while
Australia
has 10.7. The proportion
in the United States
did not even reach 0.1 times the proportion
in New Zealand
, with only 2.3. At the same time, the proportion
in the UK is almost twice that of the proportion
in the US, with 4.4.Submitted by rianadmaja on
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