The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The information about the
number
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of temporary migrant
workers
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in
Australia
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, New
Zealand
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, the United
Kingdom
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, and the United
States
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is indicated
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the table.
This
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table compares the
number
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of temporary migrant
workers
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in 2003 and 2006,
as well as
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the
number
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per 1000 people in these countries in 2006. The
number
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of short-term migrant
workers
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in all four countries experienced an increase,
although
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there was a difference in growth among them. In 2003, the country with the largest nonpermanent expatriate workforce was the United
States
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, with 577,000.
This
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number
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was larger than the combined
number
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of short-term migrant
workers
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in
Australia
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, New
Zealand
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, and the United
Kingdom
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. That year,
Australia
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only had 152,000 migrant
workers
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, and the United
Kingdom
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only had 137,000. Meanwhile, the
number
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in New
Zealand
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was much smaller, at only 65,000.
However
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, the growth of migrant labor in the United
States
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between 2003 and 2006 was smaller if we compared it to the United
Kingdom
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. The United
States
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only saw a 101,000 increase in 2006,
while
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the United
Kingdom
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experienced a larger increase with 129,000 more migrant
workers
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compared to 2003.
However
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, the growth of the nonpermanent expatriate workforce in
Australia
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and New
Zealand
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is much smaller than that in those two countries, at 67,000 and 22,000.
Nonetheless
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, the
proportion
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of temporary migrant
workers
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per 1000 people in the United
Kingdom
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and USA is less than the
proportion
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in
Australia
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and New
Zealand
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. New
Zealand
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has a
proportion
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of 21.1,
while
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Australia
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has 10.7. The
proportion
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in the United
States
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did not even reach 0.1 times the
proportion
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in New
Zealand
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, with only 2.3. At the same time, the
proportion
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in the UK is almost twice that of the
proportion
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in the US, with 4.4.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, workers, australia, zealand, kingdom, states, proportion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • temporary migrant workers
  • trends
  • absolute numbers
  • per 1,000 people
  • growth rate
  • per capita
  • labor markets
  • economies
  • significant
  • imply
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