The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line chart compares the number of cases
among
three illegal actions in England and Wales from 1970 to 2005. The cases include Change preposition
of
car
theft, house burgling
, and Replace the word
burglary
street
robbery.
Overall
, it was dominated by car
thefts whereas
street
robberies ranked as the last
. From 1995 to 2005, car
theft and house burgling witnessed a similar fluctuate
trend, Wrong verb form
fluctuating
while
street
robbery experienced a stagnant increase.
To begin
, car
theft which was constantly being
the highest crime in the given period shared an identical pattern with house burgling, both began with a small value Unnecessary verb
apply
such
as 0.40 and 0.20 million, respectively. After that, they roughly rocketed up and reached their peaks at 1.60 and around 0.70 million in 1995. However
, it dramatically decreased in the last
period.
These declines did
not Verb problem
were
experience
by the Wrong verb form
experienced
street
robbery. Remained as the most infrequent actions, this
crime was constantly at 0.05 million in each year until 1990. Then
, it steeply went up to 0.20 in 2000 and stayed the same in the final year.Submitted by evaagustine11 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, street with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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