Prevention is more important than cure. researching and treating disease is very costly, so it is better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the increasing ease of seeking information regarding infectious and non-infectious diseases, thanks to the advancement of technology, people are getting more exposed to information that previously

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only be known through medical professionals. With just

one

click away, we can do the first step of pre-screening ourselves

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any form of medical

condition

that we presume we might have. I strongly think that

this

new level of awareness about

one

's own

condition

is very helpful for anyone, but we should

also

take into account the limit of

such

preventative

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in order to exploit the benefits of having

one

. When we look for information on the internet regarding a certain medical

condition

, we can immediately know several important points of the disease itself: the cause, symptoms, prognosis of the

diseases

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, and treatments available for it. From

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we are able to understand the things we should do in order to avoid

such

disease.

Consequently

,

while

doing so, we are

also

giving ourselves a plan ahead that may benefit us in the long run. The most obvious

one

is,

for example

, the financial planning that includes our

spendings

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and savings. By

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the

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preventative measures for

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the condition

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condition

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we foresee might happen, like avoiding flu during the influenza season by having the vaccine shots, we might be able to save some money and time to buy medicines for the sickness. Even when the cost of the vaccine is being considered, since we will not know the severity of the possible flu we might have caught, it still is a safe and

convinient

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convenient

option to have.

On the other hand

, we should

also

understand the limit of

such

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. Preventative

measure

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measures

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like

vaccine

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vaccines

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should not be taken as a perfect shell against diseases, nor

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taking vitamins and minerals.

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so will most likely stop someone

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seeking the help they need when their health situation worsens. We often see

this

in the case of younger, fit and active people who think what they are doing behind the screen is enough to stop the coming, unpredictable health

condition

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onwards. In conclusion, prevention is indeed better than

curing

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. Yet as we know

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very well, we should not reject the act of curing itself when we need it, even if in the first place we think we don't need it. It is

also

should be noted that,

while

prevention may help us save some money and time, a late treatment for an unseen

condition

may hinder the possible progress we could make in

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to the disease. For

this

we should always doing,

first,

prevention, to help us notice the

second,

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need

of

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a cure.