The graph gives information about the number of books which were borrowed from four village libraries namely West Eaton, Ryeslip, Sutton Wood and Church Mount from June until September in 2014, and the pie chart shows a breakdown of kinds of book borrowed during the period.

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of books that were borrowed from four different libraries in 2014, with

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the proportion of various types of books over the four months.

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, what stands out from the graph is that there were considerable upward trends in the

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of West Eaton and Church Mount,

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the

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of Ryeslip rocketed down, another interesting point is that the

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of Sutton Wood went down during the period suddenly rocketed up. It can be seen that

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the borrowing for Sutton Wood started at 300 in June after that was

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100 in August.

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the end of the period was

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the top,

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the

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of Ryeslip was at 300 in June

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went down

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over 200 in September. Looking at the details, the

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of both West Eaton and Church Mount

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rose during the period from 50 to 150.