The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the data collected from a survey about
coffee
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and
tea
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buying and drinking habits in five different
cities
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in Australia in the
last
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4 weeks.
Overall
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, what stands out from the graph is that most of the population in all
cities
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except
Adelaide
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went to a café
for having
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coffee
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and
tea
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.
While
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in
Adelaide
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, the percentages of people who either went to a café for
coffee
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or
tea
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or bought instant
coffee
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were almost equal. Looking at the details, more than half of the residents in Melbourne, Hobart, Sydney, and Brisbane preferred to go to a café for
coffee
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or
tea
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, at approximately 64%, 63%, 61%, and 55% respectively,
whereas
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under half of the population in
Adelaide
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did so. These five
cities
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had roughly half the population purchasing instant
coffee
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that figure in Hobart and Brisbane showed almost 55%. In comparison, the proportion of people who bought fresh
coffee
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in all
cities
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was never as high as 45%. In
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regard,
Adelaide
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and Brisbane had nearly 35% of fresh
coffee
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buyers which were less likely than the other
cities
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea, cities, adelaide with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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