You are advised to spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » You should write at least 150 words. The percentage of household energy use in Australia: Percentage of household energy use in Australia
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In the modern world, most
appliances
have switched from the mechanical and analog
system to the current system which uses modern technology, including Change the spelling
analogue
appliances
in the average Australian household
. These systems require electricity as their main energy
source to power up in the first place. According to
the pie chart, most "other" appliances
in the average Australian household
use energy
like electricity, about 24%. In addition
, appliances
such
as heating and cooling devices, water heating, refrigeration, and much more use the remaining 76% of the energy
in household
, including 20% for heating and cooling and 23% for water heating.
Although
other appliances
take 24% of the household
's energy
, they only emit 16% of the greenhouse gas produced in Australia. Compared to heating and cooling's 38%, this
is small. This
may be caused by how appliances
such
as heating and cooling, and water heating, in their current stage, are still inefficient when using energy
, emitting a lot of excess energy
not used to do the appliance's task and converted to greenhouse gas.Submitted by kelly on
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