The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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These pie charts illustrate
usage
of Add an article
the usage
devices
that have been used for watching television by 18
-25 age group in Canada in 2009 and 2019.
In 2009, conventional Correct article usage
the 18
TV
gave the largest contribution among the usage
of other devices
at 34% but in 2019, it only gave only 4%. This
decline happened for desktop computers and laptops too. In 2009, the usage
of desktop computers was 18%; nevertheless
, the usage
of laptops was 20%. The usage
of desktop computers and laptops only contribute
12% each in 2019 giving them both Wrong verb form
contributed
on
the second lowest Change preposition
apply
devices
that have been used for watching television. The highest escalation happened for flat-screen TV
, from only 8% who Fix the agreement mistake
TVs
use
Wrong verb form
used
it
to watch television in 2009, it became 27% in 2019. Correct pronoun usage
them
This
escalation did not happen only on flat screen TV
, tablets and mobile phones experienced it too.
In conclusion, there are differences Fix the agreement mistake
TVs
about
Change preposition
in
devices
that have been used for watching TV
by the 18-25 age group in Canada. The biggest escalation happened for flat-screen TV
use and the most significant drop happened for conventional TV
usage
.Submitted by kelly on
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