The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The table above informs the data regarding
Australia
and Malaysia
's general population
in 1980 and 2002. It shows that the population
from both
countries increased in the span of two decades, with slightly
higher Add an article
a slightly
rate
in Malaysia
.
Interestingly, Australia
had seen a moderate jump in older population
above 65-year-old
, a little over Correct your spelling
65 years old
Malaysia
's less than 1% increase. While
both
countries had a lower birth rate
in 2002, the annual population
growth still shown
a rather constant percentage, only budging 0.1% up in Wrong verb form
showed
Australia
and 0.3% down in Malaysia
. Population
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The population
rate
for both
sexes also
remained mostly the same in both
countries.
Overall
, while
in 1980 Australia
had a bigger total population
than Malaysia
, the latter caught up a little more in the following years due to
its greater population
growth rate
, even when it dropped slightly in 2002. Malaysia
's dropping birth rate
also
did not alter this
statistic very greatly, as they already had twice bigger birth rate
growth than Australia
in the earlier year.Submitted by arsyiiimuhammad061 on
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