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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates information about the number of
people
 who have a habit of buying and drinking
coffee
 and tea in five Australian cities including
Sydney
,
Melbourne
, Brisbane, Adelaide, and
Hobart
.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the highest percentage of
Melbourne
 citizens went to café to have drinks,
while
people
 in
Hobart
 are the most buyers when it comes to instant
coffee
.
Moreover
, among individuals who are interested in fresh
coffee
,
Sydney
 ranked in
the
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first place. Looking at the details, there is
a
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 same pattern among four cities which are
Sydney
,
Melbourne
, Brisbane, and
Hobart
. In
this
 case, the vast majority of residents decided to spend time in a café to drink a cup of tea or
coffee
 which
are
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 just over 60 per
cent
 for
Sydney
 and around 63 per
cent
 for both
Melbourne
 and
Hobart
. Meanwhile, only 55 per
cent
 of Brisbane citizens
makes
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 up
this
 group.
By contrast
, the least popular chart is related to
people
 from Adelaide where under 50 per
cent
 of their population went to cafés in
last
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the last
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 4 weeks. Considering
different
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the different
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 kinds of
coffee
 which
is
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are
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 shown in the picture, more
people
choosed
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choose
chose
 instant
coffee
than
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over
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 fresh
one
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ones
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. Interestingly, the main choices were made by
Hobart
’s citizens, which is almost 55 per
cent
 and the least popular city is
Sydney
 when it comes to
drink
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drinking
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 instant
coffee
.
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