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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO₂) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO₂) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph depicts the average carbon dioxide CO2
emissions
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 per
person
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 in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal over a 40-year
period
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 from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
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, it is evident that the United Kingdom had the highest average CO2
emissions
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 per
person
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 throughout the
period
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,
while
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 Portugal had the lowest.
Additionally
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, Sweden and Italy experienced fluctuations in their
emissions
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 levels over the years. Turning to the specific data, the United Kingdom commenced with the highest average CO2
emissions
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 per
person
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, standing at 11 metric
tonnes
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 in 1967.
This
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 figure gradually decreased over the years, reaching just above 8 metric
tonnes
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 by 2007.
In contrast
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, Sweden’s average
emissions
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 started at 9 metric
tonnes
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, underwent fluctuations
,
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 and ultimately declined to slightly above 5 metric
tonnes
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 by the end of the
period
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. Moving on to Italy and Portugal, Italy began with average CO2
emissions
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 of 4 metric
tonnes
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 per
person
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, peaked at 7 metric
tonnes
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 in 1977, and
then
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 stabilized at the same level by 2007.
Conversely
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, Portugal’s
emissions
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 started at the lowest level, standing at 1 metric tonne per
person
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 in 1967 and progressively increased to 5 metric
tonnes
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 by the end of the
period
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.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 79%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words co, emissions, person, period, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • steady decline
  • upward trend
  • downward trajectory
  • emissions per person
  • industrialization
  • remarkable reduction
  • sustainable practices
  • economic development
  • government policies
  • urbanization
  • energy consumption
  • fossil fuels
  • average carbon dioxide emissions
  • comparison
  • main features
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