The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. https://writing9.com/_next/image?url=https%3A%2F%2Fimages.writing9.com%2Fc214dd20078195fdbcb53a8468110da9.png&w=1920&q=75
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The layouts provide key information about the changes that have taken place in
museum
from its establishment in 1998 to 2008.
Add an article
the museum
Overall
, its
clear from the maps that the museum has undergone substantial redevelopment, with several features either relocated or transformed. Replace the word
it's
it is
In addition
, in 1998 plan showed a simple sketch, whereas
2008
plan experienced a symmetrical design.
Correct article usage
the 2008
According to
what is shown, in 1998, the garden located
at the Add a missing verb
was located
cintre
of the museum. It featured Correct your spelling
centre
cafe
Correct article usage
a cafe
lay
above the garden and between Wrong verb form
lying
permanent
exhibition room, Correct article usage
the permanent
while
the temporary exhibition room, tickets, entrance/exit and shop on
the opposite Add a missing verb
were on
site
, Correct your spelling
side
additionally
, the bathrooms and bags and coats area were in the lower right corner.
In terms of 2008, all permanent exhibition rooms had become at
the right section and Change preposition
in
restaurant
were added Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
on
the upper left corner. Change preposition
in
Moreover
, the garden was become
more attractive with fountains and Change to the active voice
became
has become
cafe
sitting area. Bathrooms moved to be side by side with Correct article usage
a cafe
coffee
shop.Add an article
a coffee
the coffee
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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