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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart above shows the various paths taken by anthropology
graduates
 after finishing their courses. Underneath is a table showing data regarding the distribution of payment these
graduates
 received after a few years of
work
.
Majority
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The majority
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 of the students, made up more than 50% of the consensus,
work
 full-time after their degree ended. The next consideration
graduates
 often make is doing
a part-time
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part-time work
a part-time job
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work
, followed closely by those who do not
work
 or still looking for a job.
Other
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Another
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 possibility is working alongside pursuing a higher degree.
In addition
 to these, students who
ended
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end
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 up working for more than 5 years have a higher chance to accumulate salaries as high as $100,000 or more, especially for those working in the public sector.
This
 probability is almost mirrored for those working independently.
However
, it sees a 20% decrease for
graduates
 working in
the
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apply
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private companies, as they
paid
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are paid
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 mostly at the medium end of $50-75,000.
Overall
, the data suggests that most
of
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apply
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graduates
 from the
department
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Department
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 of
anthropology
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Anthropology
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 choose to
follow
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pursue
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 their degree
with
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by
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 working full-time, with those who
work
 longer than 5 years having
increase
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increased
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 chances of receiving higher wages.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates, work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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