The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart above shows the various paths taken by anthropology
graduates
after finishing their courses. Underneath is a table showing data regarding the distribution of payment these Use synonyms
graduates
received after a few years of Use synonyms
work
.
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Majority
of the students, made up more than 50% of the consensus, Correct article usage
The majority
work
full-time after their degree ended. The next consideration Use synonyms
graduates
often make is doing Use synonyms
a part-time
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part-time work
a part-time job
work
, followed closely by those who do not Use synonyms
work
or still looking for a job. Use synonyms
Other
possibility is working alongside pursuing a higher degree.
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In addition
to these, students who Linking Words
ended
up working for more than 5 years have a higher chance to accumulate salaries as high as $100,000 or more, especially for those working in the public sector. Wrong verb form
end
This
probability is almost mirrored for those working independently. Linking Words
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, it sees a 20% decrease for Linking Words
graduates
working in Use synonyms
the
private companies, as they Correct article usage
apply
paid
mostly at the medium end of $50-75,000.
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are paid
Overall
, the data suggests that most Linking Words
of
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graduates
from the Use synonyms
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Department
anthropology
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Anthropology
follow
their degree Verb problem
pursue
with
working full-time, with those who Change preposition
by
work
longer than 5 years having Use synonyms
increase
chances of receiving higher wages.Replace the word
increased
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