The charts below show Australian dollars in Australia’s trade in three nations from 2004 to 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The shots that
been
given to mystery the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade Add a missing verb
have been
three
different countries from the Change preposition
in three
year
2004 to 2009
Where Australian trade with Japan
was at 40 billion
exported to Japan
while
just under 40 billions
Fix the agreement mistake
billion
of
imported in the Change preposition
apply
year
2002 export is stayed
the same until the Change to the active voice
stays
stayed
year
2005 while
the import stayed to decrease until it
reached 30 Correct pronoun usage
they
billion
after the year
2005 the imported from Canada
to Japan
increased significantly to reach all-time high between the period given with over 60 billion
on the other hand
the import to Canada
from Japan
stayed at the same range in terms of China. They
exported Correct pronoun usage
Their
was
the same between 2002 to 2009 with approximately 40 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
billion
imported from China to Canada
was fluctuated
. It started Verb problem
apply
the
2002 with 35 Change the article
apply
billion
it got decreased until it reach
the valley with just 20 Wrong verb form
reached
billion
however
after the
2005 Change the article
apply
it's
increased Unnecessary verb
it
with
Change preposition
by
considerable
amount for Add an article
a considerable
the
trade it was steady that's been given with 20 and 40 Correct article usage
apply
billion
for imported and exported respectively
to sum up
, the top country that Canada
exported to is Japan
while
the top country Canada
imported from is ChinaSubmitted by malogeil51 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, japan, billion, canada with synonyms.
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