the graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particulae county.

the graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particulae county.
The line graph presented below shows the recycling rate of four different materials
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between 1982- 2010.
Overall
, The
Countries
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reusable materials
was
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divided into four major
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categories
- Paper and Cardboard, Glass Containers, Aluminium Cans, and Plastics. These are measured in units of percentage per year.
Firstly
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paper and
cardboards
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were recycled at an average
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60% after which, there seems to be a slight dip in 1986. Later, there was
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of the aforementioned material by 80%,
witha
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drop to 70% and has been stagnant ever since.
Whereas
, the glass containers showed a marked decline in reuse of 60% by the end of the decade.
On the other hand
, Aluminium cans were processed frequently starting with 0%
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1982 leading to a marked growth
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40%
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and has maintained
eversince
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ever since
.
Lastly
, the plastics stood as a bottom
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contender
with a stagnant recycled process, over the period of a decade with a near to none fluctuation.
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