the graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particulae county.
The line graph presented below shows the recycling rate of four different materials
in
between 1982- 2010.
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Overall
, The Countries
reusable materials Change noun form
Countries's
was
divided into four major Change the verb form
were
catergories
- Paper and Cardboard, Glass Containers, Aluminium Cans, and Plastics. These are measured in units of percentage per year.
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categories
Firstly
, The
paper and Correct article usage
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cardboards
were recycled at an average Fix the agreement mistake
cardboard
on
60% after which, there seems to be a slight dip in 1986. Later, there was Change preposition
of
surge
of the aforementioned material by 80%, Add an article
a surge
witha
drop to 70% and has been stagnant ever since. Correct your spelling
with a
Whereas
, the glass containers showed a marked decline in reuse of 60% by the end of the decade.
On the other hand
, Aluminium cans were processed frequently starting with 0% at
1982 leading to a marked growth Change preposition
in
by
40%Change preposition
of
,
and has maintained Remove the comma
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eversince
.
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ever since
Lastly
, the plastics stood as a bottom contendor
with a stagnant recycled process, over the period of a decade with a near to none fluctuation.Correct your spelling
contender
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