The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph chart displays the proportion of families in ownership or rental of housing in the United Kingdom from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
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,
people
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owned more
houses
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over the time period, and less wanted to lease
property
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. The other significant feature of
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graph is at certain years the private and public housing was similar in proportion.
People
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in 1918 more wanted to rent a
property
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than to buy it,
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as more than 75% of families were living in rented
houses
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in Britain and only around 23% of families had their own
property
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. For almost 14 years the proportion was similar to previous years, and in 1971 half population had their own
property
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and the rest of them lived in hired
houses
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. 10% more
people
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purchased
houses
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and 10% less
people
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hired spaces in 1981.
After
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this
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time period, the graph started to increase for owned accommodation and decreased for the rented ones. In 2011, British
people
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again started to rent a
property
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more.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, houses, property with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • households
  • accommodation
  • owned
  • rented
  • prevalent
  • transition period
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant
  • analyze
  • summarize
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