The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart compares data about the proportion of tourists to England who visited 4 several places (Art gallery, Pavilion, Pier, and Festival) in Brighton between 1980 and 2010.
Overall
, the main famous attraction that people visited was the Pavilion, and the places which had the lowest number of visitors were the Pier and the Art gallery.
According to
the diagram, in 1980 the Festival was popular that had 30 per
cent
of viewers, but the line decreased, and in 1995 touched the lowest point at 25 per
cent
.
Finally
, increased to 27 per
cent
, and got second
level
. the second reason that people went to Brighton in 1950 was Pavillion was 23 per
cent
.
this
line was not only rapidly changing but
also
going up, and the lines had
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in 1995
by
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45 per
cent
, so catches on the first
level
in 2010. As the graph shows in the illustration, the Art gallery had a third
level
, and in 1985 reached a peak of 35 per
cent
and had the first
level
.
However
, after that, the trend fell slightly and became the
last
place that people saw it with 8 per
cent
.
Nevertheless
, the Pier at the beginning had 10 per
cent
;
then
experienced moderate claims, and touched the third
level
by 23 per
cent
.
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