The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The diagrams delineate the ratio of
girls
in
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100
boys
in all three levels of
education
in developing and developed
countries
.
Overall
, all three charts have
boys
and
girls
almost at equal levels in developed
countries
. More noticeably, the amount of
girls
studying in secondary
education
in developed
countries
are
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almost equal to
boys
. Compared to developed
countries
, developing
countries
have not reached equal goals. Observing closer,
girls
from developing
countries
have not reached the target with only 83
girls
out of 87
boys
in primary
education
being the closest. For tertiary
education
, developing
countries
have the worst ratio with only 66
girls
out of 75
boys
.
In contrast
, developed
countries
mostly reach the
targets
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target
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of
girls
per 100
boys
. In primary
education
, the rates of
girls
per 100
boys
are almost equal. The same can be said about secondary
education
with 98
girls
out of 99
boys
. In tertiary
education
, the rates exceed the targets reaching over 100.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words girls, boys, education, countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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