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The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The diagrams delineate the ratio of
girls
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in
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 100
boys
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 in all three levels of
education
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 in developing and developed
countries
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.
Overall
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, all three charts have
boys
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 and
girls
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 almost at equal levels in developed
countries
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. More noticeably, the amount of
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 studying in secondary
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 in developed
countries
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are
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 almost equal to
boys
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. Compared to developed
countries
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, developing
countries
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 have not reached equal goals. Observing closer,
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 from developing
countries
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 have not reached the target with only 83
girls
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 out of 87
boys
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 in primary
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 being the closest. For tertiary
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, developing
countries
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 have the worst ratio with only 66
girls
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 out of 75
boys
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.
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, developed
countries
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 mostly reach the
targets
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 of
girls
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 per 100
boys
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. In primary
education
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, the rates of
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 per 100
boys
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 are almost equal. The same can be said about secondary
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 with 98
girls
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 out of 99
boys
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. In tertiary
education
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, the rates exceed the targets reaching over 100.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words girls, boys, education, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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