The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The diagrams delineate the ratio of
girls
in
100 Change preposition
to
boys
in all three levels of education
in developing and developed countries
.
Overall
, all three charts have boys
and girls
almost at equal levels in developed countries
. More noticeably, the amount of girls
studying in secondary education
in developed countries
are
almost equal to Change the verb form
is
boys
. Compared to developed countries
, developing countries
have not reached equal goals.
Observing closer, girls
from developing countries
have not reached the target with only 83 girls
out of 87 boys
in primary education
being the closest. For tertiary education
, developing countries
have the worst ratio with only 66 girls
out of 75 boys
.
In contrast
, developed countries
mostly reach the targets
of Fix the agreement mistake
target
girls
per 100 boys
. In primary education
, the rates of girls
per 100 boys
are almost equal. The same can be said about secondary education
with 98 girls
out of 99 boys
. In tertiary education
, the rates exceed the targets reaching over 100.Submitted by dohuyhoang on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words girls, boys, education, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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