The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.
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The map shows the planned
location
for a new school in Canterbury
Town
.
Overall
, there are two possible sites in different
part
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parts
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of the
town
that are shown on the map. The first
site
is located in
countryside
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a countryside
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area,
in
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on
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the
outskirt
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outskirts
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of
housing
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the housing
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zone of Canterbury
Town
.
This
site
is on the northeast
from
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of
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the university and northeast
from
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of
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the second
site
.
Tt
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It
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is
quiet
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quite
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far from the
town
centre and can only be accessed by main roads on the north side of the
site
which lead to the next
town
, Sturry
in
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5 km with 7,000 people. Because of its rural
location
,
this
area is more quiet and mostly covered with trees. The next possible
location
for
school
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the school
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is located in
town
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the town
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centre with no traffic zone. From
this
location
, the university is located on the north side of the
site
. Because of its
location
, it is easily accessible from the housing area and the
neighboring
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neighbouring
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town
, Chartham, which is located 7 km from here with
4,500
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a 4,500
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population.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words location, town, site with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • contrast
  • location
  • accessibility
  • residential areas
  • facilities
  • traffic
  • transportation
  • environment
  • cost
  • feasibility
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