The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.
The map shows the planned
location
for a new school in Canterbury Town
. Overall
, there are two possible sites in different part
of the Fix the agreement mistake
parts
town
that are shown on the map.
The first site
is located in countryside
area, Add an article
a countryside
in
the Change preposition
on
outskirt
of Fix the agreement mistake
outskirts
housing
zone of Canterbury Correct article usage
the housing
Town
.
This
site
is on the northeast from
the university and northeast Change preposition
of
from
the second Change preposition
of
site
. Tt
is Correct your spelling
It
quiet
far from the Correct your spelling
quite
town
centre and can only be accessed by main roads on the north side of the site
which lead to the next town
, Sturry in
5 km with 7,000 people. Because of its rural Change preposition
apply
location
, this
area is more quiet and mostly covered with trees.
The next possible location
for school
is located in Add an article
the school
town
centre with no traffic zone. From Add an article
the town
this
location
, the university is located on the north side of the site
. Because of its location
, it is easily accessible from the housing area and the neighboring
Change the spelling
neighbouring
town
, Chartham, which is located 7 km from here with 4,500
population.Correct article usage
a 4,500
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