The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The par bar chart provides key information about five sectors industries:
Finance
, Food processing, manufacturing, Tourism, and oil
, coal, and gas
over a period of 10 years with expectations for 2029. The units are measured in percentages.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that Finance
was by far the most important catogary
, Correct your spelling
category
whereas
relatively Manufacturing is
was the lowest one. Unnecessary verb
apply
In addition
, Tourism and oil
,coal and gas
have mostly the same pattern over the period. Furthermore
, Oil
, coal, and gas
was
the highest columns after Change the verb form
were
Finance
over the period shown.
According to
what is shown, Finance
rose dramatically to a peak of 36% and 41% percent
between 2019 and 2029, respectively. Change the spelling
per cent
By contrast
, Manufacturing in 2029 will be negligible at nearly 5%.
Oil
, coal and gas
in 2019 overtook Tourism, Manufacturing, and Food processing reaching at
32%. Remove the preposition
apply
Moreover
, Food processing in 2029 will decreasce
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decrease
to
10% Change preposition
by
percent
and goes back to how it was in 2009.Change the spelling
per cent
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