The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Now we talk about the process of manufacturing
instant
noodles
.
Instant
noodles
taste so much taste. It has already become a daily food for some people. There are seven parts in the product. We manufacture the
noodles
for machines. First, we use storage silos, water and oil. It turns into
mixer
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the mixer
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. Second, we will use the rollers to dough sheets. Third, we need to dough stip the needle sheets. Fourth, we can get the
noodles
discs. It sounds good. Fifth, we begin to cook, including the oil and drying. Sixth, we make vegetables and spices in the cups. And
last
we make the
noodles
for labels,
next
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seal in the cups.
Instant
noodles
will finish the work. It will become
a goods
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a good
goods
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in every supermarket. We can go shopping to buy
instant
noodles
. When I am hungry at
tthe
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the
night,
instant
noodles
are a delicious food at that time. Manufacturing
instant
noodles
is so complicated for me. But I wanted to eat
instant
noodles
when I was hungry for the first time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufactured
  • ingredients
  • dough
  • rolled out
  • thin strips
  • steaming process
  • partially cooked
  • fried
  • dehydrating
  • packaged
  • distribution
  • quality control
  • standards
  • flavoring powder
  • sauce packet
  • traditional pasta
  • dehydration
  • instant cooking
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