The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity 2010.
The column chart illustrates the proportion of Australian
men
and women
in 6 different age
groups
who did exercise in 2010.
It is clearly observed from the chart that, excluding the age
group
of 15 to 24, women
were more active than men
in all other age
groups
.
To begin
with, the figure for men
with the age
group
of 15 to 24 who did physical activity was 52.8% which was higher than that of women
with the same age
group
at 47.7% in 2010. Moreover
, in the age
group
of 25 to 34, the percentage of females was almost 50% which was higher than males with 42.2%. In addition
, in the age
group
of 35 to 44, the figure for women
was 52.5% which was by far higher than that of men
with 39.5% which accounts for the lowest proportion of men
among all age
groups
.
Subsequently
, the percentage of women
in the age
groups
of 45 to 54 and 55 to 64 was roughly the same at 53.3% and 53% respectively. However
, 43.1% of men
in the age
group
of 45 to 54 did regular exercise which was lower than the figure for men
in the age
group
of 55 to 64 by 2%. Nonetheless
, the proportion of older men
and women
in the age
group
of 65 and over was slightly different by just 0.4%.Submitted by amirahmadi9301 on
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