The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity 2010.
The column chart illustrates the proportion of Australian
men
and Use synonyms
women
in 6 different Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
groups
who did exercise in 2010.
It is clearly observed from the chart that, excluding the Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
group
of 15 to 24, Use synonyms
women
were more active than Use synonyms
men
in all other Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
groups
.
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To begin
with, the figure for Linking Words
men
with the Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
group
of 15 to 24 who did physical activity was 52.8% which was higher than that of Use synonyms
women
with the same Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
group
at 47.7% in 2010. Use synonyms
Moreover
, in the Linking Words
age
Use synonyms
group
of 25 to 34, the percentage of females was almost 50% which was higher than males with 42.2%. Use synonyms
In addition
, in the Linking Words
age
Use synonyms
group
of 35 to 44, the figure for Use synonyms
women
was 52.5% which was by far higher than that of Use synonyms
men
with 39.5% which accounts for the lowest proportion of Use synonyms
men
among all Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
groups
.
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Subsequently
, the percentage of Linking Words
women
in the Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
groups
of 45 to 54 and 55 to 64 was roughly the same at 53.3% and 53% respectively. Use synonyms
However
, 43.1% of Linking Words
men
in the Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
group
of 45 to 54 did regular exercise which was lower than the figure for Use synonyms
men
in the Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
group
of 55 to 64 by 2%. Use synonyms
Nonetheless
, the proportion of older Linking Words
men
and Use synonyms
women
in the Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
group
of 65 and over was slightly different by just 0.4%.Use synonyms
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