The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
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The diagram illustrates the way in which
electricity
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is produced by using geothermal energy.
Overall
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, the process consists of five stages, beginning with the cold
water
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pumping down to the geothermal zone and ending with producing
electricity
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by generator.
Initially
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, the cold
water
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is pumped down 4.5 km below the surface and goes through an injection stage in which cold
water
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is sent through a geothermal zone and its temperature increases by flowing through hot rocks. Afterwards, warmed-up
water
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undergoes a production stage and gets ready to get back to the surface. In the subsequent stage, hot
water
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pumps up to a condenser area in which condensed steam is sent into a turbine and makes the turbine ready to function.
Finally
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, the generator which is powered by a turbine, produces
electricity
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and sends it to pylons by which
electricity
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power is sent to houses and gets prepared for public use.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • generate electricity
  • diagram
  • volcano
  • magma reservoirs
  • deep underground
  • heat
  • steam
  • geothermal plant
  • turbine
  • condensed
  • pumped back
  • underground reservoirs
  • transmitted
  • power grid
  • distribution
  • continuous
  • renewable
  • volcanic activity
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