You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The two maps compare the current layout of a
school
with its past design on the same floor in 1985.
Overall
, the
school
population experienced an upward trend, and the current design of the
school
involves various changes to several infrastructures and services, mainly in the western zone.
However
, there are no modifications to the external walls, the offices, the entrance and the exit. Looking at the diagram in more detail, the
school
population increased from 1500
students
in 1985 to 2300 at present. Regarding the facilities, in 1985, there was a library, a car park, and some classrooms in the western
school
. But these are no longer present now and
instead
, a learning resources centre and a computer room are constructed there. The car park has not been demolished, but the rectangular dual pathway has been transformed into an oval road in the north of the
school
.
Acoording
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According
to the diagram, in 1985
students
participated in various activities at the playing fields, which
was
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were
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located in the southern region of the
school
. The fields have been reduced in size, and the superfluous fields are replaced with a pool, a fitness centre, and several classrooms, allowing
students
to exercise and study.
Furthermore
, the building work
also
includes the renovation of the original classroom block with 2 storeys, and the new classroom block has 3 storeys to accommodate more
students
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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