The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2000 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given charts illustrate the ratio of 4 different genres of movies screened and their
sales
in movie theatres in 1996 and 2000 in one nation.
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Overall
, Drama was the most released type of film and Comedy had the highest revenue percentage in the given period.
A closer look at the graph shows that even though Drama was the most popular type among the filmmakers, its percentage of Linking Words
sales
in both years is lower than Comedy.
Comedy is deemed the most successful as it scored the highest ratio in ticket Use synonyms
sales
and reached 20% and beyond in the late 1990s.
Moving on to Fantasy movies, there was only 15% and under films released, their percentage of Use synonyms
sales
was lowest in 1996 at about 2.5%, and approximately 6% in 2000.
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Lastly
, Romantic movies were the least popular sector through the given years, Linking Words
hence
, their income proportion stood at the lowest in 2000 (under 5%)Linking Words
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