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The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries in tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries in tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about the import of
tea
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 and
coffee
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 in
Canada
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, the
UK
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, the USA, and Germany in 2007.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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Canada
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 purchased considerably more
coffee
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 than
tea
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,
whereas
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 the
UK
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 imported far more
tea
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 than
coffee
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, showing the greatest contrast among the four countries.
To begin
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 with, the
UK
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 bought the least amount of
coffee
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, only 20,000
units
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,
while
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Canada
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 recorded the lowest
tea
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imports
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,
also
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 20,000
units
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. The
UK
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 had by far the highest
tea
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imports
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, reaching 160,000
units
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 in 2007, which was eight times higher than its
coffee
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imports
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.
Canada
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,
in contrast
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, imported 80,000
units
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 of
coffee
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, exactly four times its
tea
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 purchases. In Germany, the difference between
tea
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 and
coffee
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imports
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 was relatively small; around 40,000
units
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 of
tea
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 and 50,000
units
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 of
coffee
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 were brought in annually. In the USA, the gap between
coffee
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 and
tea
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imports
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 was more substantial, with 40,000
units
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 of
coffee
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 compared to 120,000
units
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 of
tea
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 purchased from abroad, indicating a stronger national preference for
tea
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.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, canada, uk, units, imports with synonyms.
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