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The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries in tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries in tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart compares how much
coffee
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 and
tea
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 is imported by four various countries (
Canada
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, the
UK
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, the USA and
Germany
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).
Overall
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, in a term of
tea
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, the highest point was with about 160.000
tonnes
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 in the United Kingdom. In
Canada
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, the sales of
tea
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 were marked as the lowest point with twenty thousand
tonnes
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. And in the case of
coffee
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, sold
coffee
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 in
Germany
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 was around 42.000
tonnes
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 at most and at least twenty thousand
tonnes
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 were put on sale in the
UK
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. It is visible in a bar chart, that, the
UK
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 and the USA imported much more
tea
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 (160.000 and 110.000
tonnes
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) than
Germany
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 and
Canada
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 (40.000 and 20.000
tonnes
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). But their sale of
coffee
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 was less than the other two countries (40.000 and 20.000
tonnes
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). The
most
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 percentage of
coffee
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 sold by
Germany
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 is approximately 42.000
tonnes
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.
Additionally
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, the
UK
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 the USA and
Canada
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 slightly minimized the selling of
coffee
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 products by just 2.000
tonnes
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 of
coffee
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, respectively, compared to
Germany
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, when selling
coffee
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 products grew marginally by 10.000-12.000
tonnes
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea, canada, uk, germany, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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