The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries in tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries in tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries in tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart compares
tea
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and
coffee
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in terms of their importation rates in four different countries.
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Overall
Punctuation problem
Overall,
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we can see the importation of
tea
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in the UK and
USA
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the USA
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have
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has
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the highest rate. These
graph
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graphs
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illustrate that these countries buy a lot of
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tea
Punctuation problem
tea,
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where the highest
amount
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of
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import
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imports
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have
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UK rather than in Canada and Germany First of all, the United Kingdom have the highest
the
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apply
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level of buying abroad
tea
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which is 160.000
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tones
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tons
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and at the same time have the lowest
amount
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of
import
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of
coffee
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which
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, which
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is about 20.000
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tones
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tons
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. The second highest
amount
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of
import
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of
tea
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is
USA
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the USA
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Punctuation problem
,
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it is under 120.000
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tones
Use the right word
tonnes
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Linking Words
while
Punctuation problem
, while
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they have 40.000
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tones
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tonnes
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import
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apply
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of
coffee
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In addition
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,
the
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apply
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Germany and Canada have the most
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import
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imports
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of
the
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apply
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tea
Punctuation problem
tea,
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where in Germany it is a little bit higher than 40.000
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tones
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tons
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and
tea
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just
Verb problem
is just
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a little bit under than
coffee
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. In
Canada
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Canada,
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the
amount
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of
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import
Replace the word
imported
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coffee
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reaches
the
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apply
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40.000
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tones
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tons
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while
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tea
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is only 20.000
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tones
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tons
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, amount, import, tones with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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