The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows information about the
police
budget in 2017 and 2018 and the charts provide data on the way of spending money on different items in the same years.
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Overall
, it can be seen that all sources of the Linking Words
police
budgets saw upward trends, Use synonyms
while
distribution ways changed in different ways.
Looking at the details, it appears that the national government was the most important source of Linking Words
police
budget in both 2017 and 2018, with 175.5 and 177.8 million Use synonyms
pounds
respectively. The second highest source was the local taxes, which increased significantly, from 91.2 m Use synonyms
pounds
in 2017 to 102.3 m Use synonyms
pounds
in 2018 respectively. Other sources of Use synonyms
police
budget like grants were the least on the list, with only 38 and 38.5 million Use synonyms
pounds
in 2017 and 2018 respectively.
In terms of spending money, salaries of officers and staff were the lead in both 2017 and 2018, but Use synonyms
this
figure was the only item which saw a downward trend over the given period, from 75% to 69% respectively. Linking Words
Conversely
, technology was at the bottom of the list with 8% and 14% in 2017 and 2018 respectively, which was the only item that saw an upward trend. Linking Words
Finally
, building a transport saw stable during the period at 17% in both years.Linking Words
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words police, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
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