The graph shows below the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented line graphs elucidate information about the development of buying places in one country from 2100 to 2018.
Overall
, it can be seen that the amount of shopping Linking Words
place
that close and new were decreased.
In 2011, there were approximately 6.500 Fix the agreement mistake
places
marketplace
that Change to a plural noun
marketplaces
cannot
maintain their presence. Wrong verb form
could not
In
the other hand, Change preposition
On
a
number of grand opening Correct article usage
the
shops
Use synonyms
were
around 8,500. After that, Correct subject-verb agreement
was
in
2012 to 2014 Change preposition
from
Use synonyms
shops closure
had fluctuations Fix the agreement mistake
shop closures
whereas
Linking Words
Use synonyms
shops
Fix the agreement mistake
shop
opening
rapidly increased and reached a peakReplace the word
openings
of
. The amount of those two figures Change preposition
apply
were
nearly Change the verb form
was
same
at roughly 6.000. In 2015, almost every shopping place could continue Correct article usage
the same
their
activities, even though the improvement was minimal. The development of opening and closing Correct pronoun usage
its
shops
in 2016 and 2017 Use synonyms
were
remained steady at 4.000 and 5.000 respectively and Unnecessary verb
apply
had
Unnecessary verb
apply
a
moderately declined to 3.000 in 2018 for Correct article usage
apply
new
Add an article
the new
a new
building
of shopping and minimally rose to around 5.000 for Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
closures
Replace the word
closing
shops
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops with synonyms.
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