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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The table below illustrates the population figures (In
millions
) for four countries for 2003 and forecast
figure
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figures
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 for 2025 and 2050.
Overall
, the
number of
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apply
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population expected to sharply increase in Indonesia after 2003,
while
 anticipated to increase in Italy. In 2003, the
number of
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apply
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population reached 34 million in Argentina, and expected to
jumped
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jump
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 to 48 and 62
millions
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million
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 in 2025 and 2050, respectively.
Similarly
, Indonesia,
which
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apply
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is expected to rock from 238, reaching 274 in 2025 and 312 in 2050.
While
Republic
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the Republic
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 of Korea registered 48
millions
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million
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, the number
expected
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is expected
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 to show
slight
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a slight
the slight
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 increase and
stood
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stand
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 at 58
millions
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million
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 in 2025 and 2050.
However
, Italy reported 54
millions
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million
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 in 2003,
is
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which is
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 expected to fall to about 47
millions
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million
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 in 2025 and 45 in 2025, dropping approximately 7
millions
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million
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 throughout the upcoming years.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • projected figures
  • population growth
  • decline
  • initial population
  • highlight
  • differences
  • compare
  • expected changes
  • significant increases
  • significant decreases
  • entire period
  • contributing factors
  • birth rates
  • immigration
  • economic conditions
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