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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided diagram shows information about the number of people in 4 different countries in 2003 and how many are expected in 2025 and 2050, in millions.
Overall
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, what stands out from the gathered data is that population rates in Argentina and
Indonesia
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 are significantly higher than in other countries.
Conversely
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, Italian individuals are forecasted to be reduced in numbers throughout the years. In 2003, Argentina accounted for 34
million
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 citizens,
while
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Indonesia
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 had 238
million
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 already.
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, the former country's capacity will grow by 50% and the latter by 10% only, with future levels at 48 and 274
million
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 respectively.
Subsequently
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, in 2050, it is expected that the number of Argentina will slightly increase to 62
million
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, whilst
Indonesia
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 will reach the maximum level of 312
million
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.
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, the inhabitant density in Italy and the Republic of Korea were considerably higher than in
Indonesia
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, having 54 and 48
million
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turn.
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, the statistics of Italy’s size are anticipated to have a steady decline over the upcoming decades, representing only 45
million
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 in 2050.
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, Korea will have a modest rise after 2003 figures and level off at 52
million
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 in 2025 and 2050.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words indonesia, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • projected figures
  • population growth
  • decline
  • initial population
  • highlight
  • differences
  • compare
  • expected changes
  • significant increases
  • significant decreases
  • entire period
  • contributing factors
  • birth rates
  • immigration
  • economic conditions
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