Subsidising of fruits and vegetables by
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is
by few as they are healthy
foods
and others believe unhealthy should be taxed. In my opinion, there should be
subsidyFix the agreement mistake
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on nutritious
food
and
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on junk
foods
, as implementing a single solution to the
obesity
epidemic would not suffice.
In the recent
there has been
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increase in physical health issues
such
as diabetes, hypertension and cardiac
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.
This
has been primarily attributed to unhealthy dietary habits resulting in > 30% of
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population
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either overweight or obese, as reported by
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WorldCorrect article usage
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Health Organisation(WHO).
Considering the fact that fruits and vegetables are rich sources of micronutrients and essential minerals, which are important for adequate physiological functioning and
.
This
is supported by multiple studies, which
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proven that having
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food
in everyday
life
increases
by restoring cholesterol levels,
antioxidants, maintaining sugar levels, and
also
helpsWrong verb form
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in clearing toxins from
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. A personal example is of my
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who regularly takes seasonal fruits and vegetables
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lived till 90 years,
where asCorrect your spelling
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his counterparts who succumbed to eating oily
food
and predominantly
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diet died earlier than him. Another point to consider here is the cost, the cost becomes a significant issue for
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who can not afford to include
this
lifestyle in their
life
, which leads to malnutrition and hinders
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his or her highest potential. The government by providing
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may help these sections of society to ultimately provide equal opportunity for all to have a fulfilling
life
.
On the other hand
, putting additional
on unhealthy
food
such
as fried potatoes, pizza, burgers and other fast
foods
may help in curbing the epidemic of
obesity
. The cost of these eateries is so affordable that even the poor can afford and
this
leadCorrect subject-verb agreement
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obesity
to
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present even in
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economic status population.
This
is
by the statistics of WHO, the data states that
obesity
is as prevalent in poor as it is in affluent sections of society.
Hence
, putting
taxAdd an article
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on these junk
foods
may help in reducing
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consumption.
Nonetheless
, it is more complicated.
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is the behaviour of people which needs
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where they indulge in
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lifestyle not limited to restricting to healthy
food
habits. People
also
need to inculcate regular physical exercise, avoid smoking, avoid drinking and have good psychological
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to have
and
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enriching
life
.
To summarise, subsidising healthy
foods
along with
taxing
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fast
foods
may help to decrease the burden of diseases related to
obesity
but it
notAdd a missing verb
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sufficient. People need to adapt to a much healthier lifestyle and focus on
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to bring in behavioural
to tackle the epidemic of
this
proportion.