The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart provides information concerning the comparison between 1996 and 2006 of the total percentage of domestic movie releases and ticket sales. The data can be divided into two groups, namely the number that experienced an upward trend and a downward trend. Figures are given in percentages.

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, it can be clearly seen that the dramatic films released in 2006 were the highest,

whereas

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the lowest were the romantic movies in 1996 and 2006.

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with, the difference in the percentage of films released in 1996 was approximately 5 percent starting from drama at 27, comedy at 20, fantasy at 13, and romance at 7. In 2006, the difference was almost 10 percent which is 35, 25, 16, and 7. Moving on to the percentage of selling tickets, both drama and comedy films had the highest level of sales which is above 15,

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fantasy and romance ranked lowest at under 7.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

depict
significant increases/decreases
highlighting
drawing comparisons
discrepancies
notable trends
unexpected findings
anomalies
phenomenon
emphasizing
evolution
implications
producers
distributors
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