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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided pie charts reveal information about
water
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 utilized for varied aims in different parts of the world with percentages.
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, these pie charts stand out with agricultural
use
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 in
Africa
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 and in
Asia
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 where
water
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 was used in these premises mostly compared to others, whilst industrial
use
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 dominated in North
America
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 and in
Europe
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 in terms of usage of
water
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 supply. As the charts compare the data on the industry's usage of
water
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, the greatest proportion of it was used in
Europe
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 and in North
America
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, with the numbers 53% and 48% , respectively. In the other countries, it's clear that it was utilized less in
Africa
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 and in Central
Asia
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, and it represented 7% and 8% , in that order. Regarding agriculture, a significant amount of
water
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 was operated for
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 in
Africa
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 and in Central
Asia
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 as well. In Central
Asia
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, it accounted for 88% and 84% of
Africa
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.
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 is
in contrast
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 to domestic
use
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 , the highest proportions were in North
America
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 and in
Europe
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. Apparently, it reached 48% for North
America
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 and in
Europe
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, the usage of
water
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 accounted for 53% ,as for domestic
use
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, africa, asia, america, europe with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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