The chart and table show information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart illustrates the visitors by their species in percentage.
While the
table below shows the average length of arrival in the country, Correct word choice
The
preferable
Add an article
the preferable
place
to live and activities that are mainly done by Fix the agreement mistake
places
seesighters
.
Correct your spelling
sighters
Overall
, the most amount of tourists came from Europe, second place is taken by the US. Asians are most likely to sightsee the sights that they visit, meanwhile, travellers from other territories
main leisure is surfing.
Change noun form
territories'
territory's
Firstly
, Eastern trippers spend 7 days at their most well-known accommodation, a 5-star hotel. They hold the last
place in the list of 4 countries visiting a republic with 10%.
Secondly
, American journeyers spend a fortnight of their vacation. They prefer to stay at 4-star hotels, not as superior as asians
. 35% is the stat, which American tourists take in visiting Change the capitalization
Asians
destinanion
, being runner-ups. Correct your spelling
destination
destinations
In addition
, the prime activity that they do in
land they travel to is the same as the far-easterns, sightseeing.Change preposition
on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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