The graph below shows in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK.
The graph indicates the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in the UK between 1996 and 2003.
Overall
, it is apparent that four technologies were listed in the chart which were CD player, mobile phone, home computer and internet access. Moreover
, the accessibility
of UK households to these technologies gradually increased in this
period.
From 1996 to 2003, the percentage of home computer usage gradually rose from 25% to 48%. Similarly
, CD player accessibility
also
had the same upward tendency, which climbed up steadily from 60% to 82% during this
time. The mobile phone usage fluctuated wildly. To be more specific, the
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accessibility
had the lowest percentage in 1996, which was only 18%, then
ascended dramatically to 70% after 7 years. Moreover
, the
internet access appeared in 1998, which was slower than other modern technologies. Correct article usage
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However
, the proportion of internet accessibility
still increased with incredible speed from 10% to over 40% in just 5 years.Submitted by dohuyhoang on
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