The graph below shows four methods of dealing with waste in four countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given column graph illustrates the methods of dealing with
waste
in multiple countries, it is clear that
the Netherlands has the highest percentage of waste
being recycled with approximately 68%, also
the Netherlands is the least country
that landfills its waste
with about 7%.
According to
the graph, the United Kindom is the most
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country
that deals with its waste
by landfilling it significantly as shown in the graph,Nonetheless
, the U.K. is the lowest country
that burns waste
which is an advantage for them.
Secondly
, Spain and Italy seem to have the same percentage of landfilled waste
with
40%, and the same rate of using wasted products in chemicals.
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at
Overall
, the Netherlands has an advantage as the most
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country
that recycles waste
and the least that landfills its waste
,but Spain and Italy are required to be aware on
improving their recycling management,Change preposition
of
also
the U.K. will have to decrease the rate of landfilled waste
and try to recycle it.Submitted by yazanalt523 on
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