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The graph below shows four methods of dealing with waste in four countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows four methods of dealing with waste in four countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given column graph illustrates the methods of dealing with
waste
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 in multiple countries,
it is clear that
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 the Netherlands has the highest percentage of
waste
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 being recycled with approximately 68%,
also
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 the Netherlands is the least
country
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 that landfills its
waste
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 with about 7%.
According to
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 the graph, the United Kindom is the
most
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country
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 that deals with its
waste
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 by landfilling it significantly as shown in the graph,
Nonetheless
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, the U.K. is the lowest
country
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 that burns
waste
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 which is an advantage for them.
Secondly
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, Spain and Italy seem to have the same percentage of landfilled
waste
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with
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 40%, and the same rate of using wasted products in chemicals.
Overall
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, the Netherlands has an advantage as the
most
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country
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 that recycles
waste
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 and the least that landfills its
waste
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,but Spain and Italy are required to be aware
on
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 improving their recycling management,
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 the U.K. will have to decrease the rate of landfilled
waste
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 and try to recycle it.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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