You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The following two pie charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The pie chart gives information about the outcome of watching
Tv
, eating Out, and talking with Correct your spelling
TV
friends
in European
between 1985 and 1995 .
Correct your spelling
Europe
Overall
, the highest rate in 1995 was talking with friends
, whereas
the lowest rate was other. On the other hand
, talking with friends
grew in 1995, while
eating out decline
in the same year.
Looking at the details, the rate of watching Wrong verb form
declined
Tv
was 32% in 1985, Correct your spelling
TV
However
, it was 30% in 1995. Furthermore
, the ratio of talking with friends
increased from 21 % to 26 % in 1995 %, while
the percentage of eating out decreased from 23% to 8 % in 1995.
Additionally
, looking at more details, we can notice that the proportion of talking with family was 81 % in 1985. On the contrary
, the percentage of talking with family was 7% in 1995. In addition
to that, the percentage of playing computer games was 27% in 1995.Submitted by fatoomdes on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words friends with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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