The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came form and the chars show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came form and the chars show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The above information delineates the
overall
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budget for the police departments in one area of Britain in the years 2017 and 2018. The table illustrates the source of income and the pie chart shows its expenditure.
According to
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the data, the main source of money came from the National government of Britain.
However
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, the salaries distributed lead to the primary expense of the total money spent.
To begin
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with, in the
year
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2017, 175.5
million
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was given by the National government
whereas
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in 2018, it rose to 177.8
million
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.
Besides
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this
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, local taxes contributed to 91.2
million
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but in 2018, it soared to 102.3
million
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. Salaries for officers and staff are mentioned to be 75% by the
year
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2017
on the other hand
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, in the following
year
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it dropped to 69%.
Moreover
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, buildings and transport hovered throughout the period at 17%. Technologies in the
year
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2017, spent around 8%
nevertheless
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in 2018 it was 14% which was double the previous
year
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's expenditure.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words year, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget
  • allocation
  • funding sources
  • national government
  • local taxes
  • expenditure
  • distribution
  • categories
  • spending
  • salaries
  • technology
  • infrastructure
  • buildings
  • transport
  • financial year
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • economic factors
  • policy changes
  • comparisons
  • significant/noticeable changes
  • priorities
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