You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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the bar charts compare the number of
incidents
and injuries ( per 100 million commuter miles) travelled by different kinds of transportation in 2002.
it is clear that
the highest number of incidents
and injuries happened because of the demand response with 225 and 173 respectively , while
commuter rail
made up the lowest amount for both .
in further
detail for incidents
, light rail
and bus
had Add an article
the bus
equal
number at 76. Add an article
the equal
an equal
moreover
, commuter rail
made up the lowest amount in all 5 categories , while
demand response accounted for 225 , which is the peak of the bar.
moving into injuries , it is obvious that it followed the same patterns as incidents
for the lowest and highest with 17 and 173. furthermore
,heavy and light rail
were almost the same by 4 and the bus was the second place with 66.Submitted by yasaman.bozorgzad9 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words incidents, rail with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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